This is a piece of fiction. I will read it all then write what I think about it. (I think I shoud do that more often than not for longer things, otherwise I just end up copying too much.)
This was a very good short story/flash fic./scene about a young magic user who has a traumatic lesion which causes horrible sensory experiences and also his magic to flare up uncontrollably.
Really visceral description that a survivor has told me was very representative. Good fiction.
Moment of lovely tenderness with his dad looking after him.
I want to know what happened, I want to hear the rest of his story.